This has been amazing, I am genuinely in awe. I admit it, I started playing with not many expectations... but this is something else. Absolutely brilliant. I've always been an avid reader and this is such an amazing piece of storytelling, and the way it uses the text effects and transitions to emphasize the pace of the plot is fantastic. Also really loved that the choices /actually/ do matter.
The biggest of kudos, looking forward to see more from y'all.
A really well-constructed piece, the choices really mattered from start to finish and gave great opportunity to steer what character I wanted Evie to be (steadfast, hopeful, if slightly clumsy). The characterisation of the different passengers was super, you managed to fit a lot of relationship-building into a short flight. There were a couple of lovely subtle flourishes in there too, particularly the little details various mechanical faults within the plane, which really amped up the tension (how do they let those things fly?!) And what an ending! Really enjoyed it!
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This is beautiful storytelling, thank you for writing this!
Wonderful. Really hit me in a way I didn't expect.
loved it! Excellent writing.
absolutely brill!
Brilliant! That ending gobsmacked!
This has been amazing, I am genuinely in awe. I admit it, I started playing with not many expectations... but this is something else. Absolutely brilliant. I've always been an avid reader and this is such an amazing piece of storytelling, and the way it uses the text effects and transitions to emphasize the pace of the plot is fantastic. Also really loved that the choices /actually/ do matter.
The biggest of kudos, looking forward to see more from y'all.
This was a nice experience!
Brilliant! Fantastic writing, excellent narrative design. I wish it continued!
A really well-constructed piece, the choices really mattered from start to finish and gave great opportunity to steer what character I wanted Evie to be (steadfast, hopeful, if slightly clumsy). The characterisation of the different passengers was super, you managed to fit a lot of relationship-building into a short flight. There were a couple of lovely subtle flourishes in there too, particularly the little details various mechanical faults within the plane, which really amped up the tension (how do they let those things fly?!) And what an ending! Really enjoyed it!
Dang, this was really good. Nice work.
Thank you so much 😁